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by lujo86
February 7th, 2023, 9:08 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
Replies: 22
Views: 13479

Re: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign

I prefer this mainline sentence: "Orcish mercenaries were hired and dispatched to bring about their ruin." I did not like the revised, "The great forest woke to the howling of wolves, the bellows of trolls and the cries of orcs, brought down from the North with promises of plunder, s...
by lujo86
February 7th, 2023, 8:25 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
Replies: 22
Views: 13479

Re: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign

I tried getting straight to Alduin, but the lines there are messed up beyond belief because Delfador starts talking about needing experienced troops for Elesenfar, but it doesn't seem like Elesenfar was mentioned anywhere previously, so the player reading those lines would have no idea about its si...
by lujo86
February 6th, 2023, 10:38 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
Replies: 22
Views: 13479

Re: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign

Right, and here's the first draft of Blackwater: The goals were: a) make it less contrived and more spontaneous b) make Kaylan more likeable c) give the player some tips about how to handle the scenario d) make it more immersive, with people involved more aware of the world around them e) clean up e...
by lujo86
February 6th, 2023, 9:06 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
Replies: 22
Views: 13479

Re: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign

Ok, so, after taking the feedback into account, here's a 2nd pass, which should be much better, even if there's likely plenty of room for improvement further. Lines for Scenario 1, and I'll put up a first draft of Blackwater shortly. Enjoy, and feel free to critique. #. [message]: speaker=narrator #...
by lujo86
February 5th, 2023, 6:28 pm
Forum: Heir to the Throne
Topic: Scenario 5a: Muff Malal's Peninsula
Replies: 53
Views: 69267

Re: Scenario 5a: Muff Malal's Peninsula

(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 3, but I can see it being more difficult for a beginner, especially if they don't have experience fighting zombies, or if they didn't feed XP to the righ...
by lujo86
February 5th, 2023, 3:01 pm
Forum: Heir to the Throne
Topic: Scenario 18: A Choice Must be Made
Replies: 46
Views: 48470

Re: Scenario 18: A Choice Must be Made

(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) I only went for the Merfolk route, so I felt like I could've done it without recruiting anything but a single merman. So 0. But I went that way with it b...
by lujo86
February 5th, 2023, 2:45 pm
Forum: Heir to the Throne
Topic: Scenario 24: Battle for Wesnoth
Replies: 83
Views: 261355

Re: Scenario 24: Battle for Wesnoth

(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 3 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10. (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? The queen ...
by lujo86
February 5th, 2023, 1:36 pm
Forum: Heir to the Throne
Topic: Scenario 23: Test of the Clans
Replies: 89
Views: 94241

Re: Scenario 23: Test of the Clans

(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 7 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10. (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? It felt sh...
by lujo86
February 5th, 2023, 12:02 pm
Forum: Heir to the Throne
Topic: Scenario 22: Return to Wesnoth
Replies: 33
Views: 36555

Re: Scenario 22: Return to Wesnoth

(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 1 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10. (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? It felt li...
by lujo86
February 4th, 2023, 7:18 pm
Forum: Heir to the Throne
Topic: Scenario 7: Crossroads
Replies: 88
Views: 99989

Re: Scenario 7: Crossroads

(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 4 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10. (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? Meh. (5) W...
by lujo86
February 4th, 2023, 7:06 pm
Forum: Heir to the Throne
Topic: Scenario 4: Bay of Pearls
Replies: 127
Views: 151437

Re: Scenario 4: Bay of Pearls

(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 1 It's strange, because I don't remember it being this easy, but this is because I foggily remember playing it a bunch when I was younger and way less ex...
by lujo86
February 4th, 2023, 6:42 pm
Forum: Heir to the Throne
Topic: Scenario 05b: Isles of the Damned
Replies: 99
Views: 114573

Re: Scenario 05b: Isles of the Damned

(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 1* *But I have too much experience with this scenario. It's probably not nearly as easy to someone playing it for the first time. (3) How clear did you f...
by lujo86
February 4th, 2023, 6:30 pm
Forum: Heir to the Throne
Topic: Scenario 20b: Underground Channels
Replies: 19
Views: 25826

Re: Scenario 20b: Underground Channels

(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 5 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10 (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? Alright, I ...
by lujo86
February 4th, 2023, 6:21 pm
Forum: Heir to the Throne
Topic: Scenario 17: The Sceptre of Fire
Replies: 84
Views: 224281

Re: Scenario 17: The Sceptre of Fire

(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 1 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10 (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? It was unus...
by lujo86
February 4th, 2023, 6:06 pm
Forum: Heir to the Throne
Topic: Scenario 16: Hasty Alliance
Replies: 44
Views: 48733

Re: Scenario 16: Hasty Alliance

(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 1 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10 (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? Fair enough...