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- February 7th, 2023, 9:08 am
- Forum: Writers’ Forum
- Topic: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
- Replies: 22
- Views: 14712
Re: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
I prefer this mainline sentence: "Orcish mercenaries were hired and dispatched to bring about their ruin." I did not like the revised, "The great forest woke to the howling of wolves, the bellows of trolls and the cries of orcs, brought down from the North with promises of plunder, s...
- February 7th, 2023, 8:25 am
- Forum: Writers’ Forum
- Topic: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
- Replies: 22
- Views: 14712
Re: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
I tried getting straight to Alduin, but the lines there are messed up beyond belief because Delfador starts talking about needing experienced troops for Elesenfar, but it doesn't seem like Elesenfar was mentioned anywhere previously, so the player reading those lines would have no idea about its si...
- February 6th, 2023, 10:38 am
- Forum: Writers’ Forum
- Topic: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
- Replies: 22
- Views: 14712
Re: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
Right, and here's the first draft of Blackwater: The goals were: a) make it less contrived and more spontaneous b) make Kaylan more likeable c) give the player some tips about how to handle the scenario d) make it more immersive, with people involved more aware of the world around them e) clean up e...
- February 6th, 2023, 9:06 am
- Forum: Writers’ Forum
- Topic: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
- Replies: 22
- Views: 14712
Re: Volunteering to spruce up the dialogue in one particular campaign
Ok, so, after taking the feedback into account, here's a 2nd pass, which should be much better, even if there's likely plenty of room for improvement further. Lines for Scenario 1, and I'll put up a first draft of Blackwater shortly. Enjoy, and feel free to critique. #. [message]: speaker=narrator #...
- February 5th, 2023, 6:28 pm
- Forum: Heir to the Throne
- Topic: Scenario 5a: Muff Malal's Peninsula
- Replies: 53
- Views: 71683
Re: Scenario 5a: Muff Malal's Peninsula
(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 3, but I can see it being more difficult for a beginner, especially if they don't have experience fighting zombies, or if they didn't feed XP to the righ...
- February 5th, 2023, 3:01 pm
- Forum: Heir to the Throne
- Topic: Scenario 18: A Choice Must be Made
- Replies: 46
- Views: 50455
Re: Scenario 18: A Choice Must be Made
(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) I only went for the Merfolk route, so I felt like I could've done it without recruiting anything but a single merman. So 0. But I went that way with it b...
- February 5th, 2023, 2:45 pm
- Forum: Heir to the Throne
- Topic: Scenario 24: Battle for Wesnoth
- Replies: 83
- Views: 267983
Re: Scenario 24: Battle for Wesnoth
(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 3 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10. (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? The queen ...
- February 5th, 2023, 1:36 pm
- Forum: Heir to the Throne
- Topic: Scenario 23: Test of the Clans
- Replies: 89
- Views: 97622
Re: Scenario 23: Test of the Clans
(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 7 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10. (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? It felt sh...
- February 5th, 2023, 12:02 pm
- Forum: Heir to the Throne
- Topic: Scenario 22: Return to Wesnoth
- Replies: 33
- Views: 38102
Re: Scenario 22: Return to Wesnoth
(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 1 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10. (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? It felt li...
- February 4th, 2023, 7:18 pm
- Forum: Heir to the Throne
- Topic: Scenario 7: Crossroads
- Replies: 88
- Views: 102744
Re: Scenario 7: Crossroads
(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 4 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10. (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? Meh. (5) W...
- February 4th, 2023, 7:06 pm
- Forum: Heir to the Throne
- Topic: Scenario 4: Bay of Pearls
- Replies: 129
- Views: 156134
Re: Scenario 4: Bay of Pearls
(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 1 It's strange, because I don't remember it being this easy, but this is because I foggily remember playing it a bunch when I was younger and way less ex...
- February 4th, 2023, 6:42 pm
- Forum: Heir to the Throne
- Topic: Scenario 05b: Isles of the Damned
- Replies: 99
- Views: 118286
Re: Scenario 05b: Isles of the Damned
(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 1* *But I have too much experience with this scenario. It's probably not nearly as easy to someone playing it for the first time. (3) How clear did you f...
- February 4th, 2023, 6:30 pm
- Forum: Heir to the Throne
- Topic: Scenario 20b: Underground Channels
- Replies: 19
- Views: 26900
Re: Scenario 20b: Underground Channels
(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 5 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10 (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? Alright, I ...
- February 4th, 2023, 6:21 pm
- Forum: Heir to the Throne
- Topic: Scenario 17: The Sceptre of Fire
- Replies: 85
- Views: 234573
Re: Scenario 17: The Sceptre of Fire
(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 1 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10 (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? It was unus...
- February 4th, 2023, 6:06 pm
- Forum: Heir to the Throne
- Topic: Scenario 16: Hasty Alliance
- Replies: 44
- Views: 50519
Re: Scenario 16: Hasty Alliance
(1) What difficulty level and Wesnoth version have you played the scenario on? 1.16.2 Highest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 1 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? 10 (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? Fair enough...