The Gnats Franken Dungeon
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
I think that looks good, it's just the right size. Also are you still going to put leadership on this line of units?
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Hmm, maybe. Though for an ability as powerful as level 4 leadership it seems OP to add it into the middle of a unit line.
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Hi here is another dune folk sprite! I turned the bad legacier into the lvl 5 advancement for the dune folk mixed fighter. I believe his current name for the lvl 3 is the Ranger. He is now a match for the other lvl 5 leaders.
Ranger lvl 3: Confronter lvl 4: Challenger lvl 5: Any suggestions for improvements or thoughts?
Ranger lvl 3: Confronter lvl 4: Challenger lvl 5: Any suggestions for improvements or thoughts?
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wow they look very very badass. i like them. the lv5 looks so burtal
EDIT: the lv4 shield is the same as the lv5 and hence feels a bit out of proprotions
but other then that, nice work
EDIT: the lv4 shield is the same as the lv5 and hence feels a bit out of proprotions
but other then that, nice work
stuff I worked on: Dunefolk Rework - ghype's Daily Art
Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Yeah that looks really good, maybe you could find a bigger shield to replace that one though...
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Thank you! Yes badass was what I was going for! I feel like this desert conqueror is one guy you would not want to meet when rider your camel down the road
Okay I will see what I can do!
Also here is a revision of the heirophant sprite. I still think it could use a little work to look more impressive.
Here is the lvl 4 for comparison:
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Well for hierophant your missing the wings. and possibly adding a staff or even a elven scepter would work nicely
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Thank you! Yes I was trying to decide how to add that in and still make this unit look unique so I will see if I can do so!
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New bigger shield:
And an improvement to the legacier's feet:
And an improvement to the legacier's feet:
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These are some nice feet.
stuff I worked on: Dunefolk Rework - ghype's Daily Art
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Yes, before it looked to small proportionally.
Here is a WIP for the lvl 5 pheonix knight:
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Yeah that looks quite good, I always thought that line of advancements to be more separate from the grand marshal, in the sense that the grand marshal is bright and shows more wealth as the war master shows more gray colors.
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So i ding this unit concept but the shield seemed somewhat wrong.
I changed the color to fit its armour and filled some empty pixel which i came across while doing so.
I changed the color to fit its armour and filled some empty pixel which i came across while doing so.
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well all you need to do is add in the cape on the left side their is a weird gap without it and yes the shield also looks a bit abnormal.
if this is suppose to be a pheonix knight line it be better giving it a flaming sword. unless its suppose to be like a holy sword but even than one could change the flames from red to a white. another note if you make the pheonix knight have red flames then you might want to give the maverick bluish-white flames as it shows a increase in power.
if this is suppose to be a pheonix knight line it be better giving it a flaming sword. unless its suppose to be like a holy sword but even than one could change the flames from red to a white. another note if you make the pheonix knight have red flames then you might want to give the maverick bluish-white flames as it shows a increase in power.
Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon
Hi everyone thanks for the advice!!
I have tried to add some wings to the Heirophant as suggest. What do you think?
I have tried to add some wings to the Heirophant as suggest. What do you think?
Thank you that looks great! (the shield was too silver before) I have taken what you have done and added a better cape (and bigger sword )!
That is a good idea! I am not very good at drawing flames but I will try to make something that looks decent.
Yes that was what I was going for! A sort of darker warrior who draws from the magical power of the pheonix.
Creator of: The Reign of The Lords Era,The Gnats Franken Dungeon.