Elethiel

[Konrad2]

Disclaimer:
I'm not the author. I made this topic because there is still no topic of this campaign and I'd like to able to report/collect bugs/suggestions.

Feedback:

Spoiler:

Scenarios
S1
ennemies -> enemies
orcs'raids -> orcish raids
Elenthiel -> Elethiel
3 good -> three good
Alert !! -> Alert!!
forest !! -> forest!!
bruch -> bunch
had never -> have never
needs exercise -> needs exercise.
colors !! -> colors
to aid me -> to aid us
It will be -> It would be
dangers alone -> dangers on our own
double attack points -> doubles attack damage
magical !! -> magical!!

I'd suggest giving Lanna an additional fireball attack, that way her comment about fireballs makes sense.

S2
To me it looks like income and gold of the enemy leader was
1) accidentally swapped
and 2) the gold was accidentally outcommented, which is why the enemy leader has only 10 gold to begin with.
It doesn't make sense to me that I already know what the enemy leader is named and that there is a message to find. I'd suggest setting the objectives to 'explore', then when you discover enemies to 'defeat the enemy leader', and add an event about spotting a message when you spot the enemy keep, and adding a 'read the message' objective.

male Gorog -> Gorog
experiment -> experience
i am not -> I am not
exterminated !! -> exterminated!!
go ! -> go!
silly orcs -> foolish orcs

S3
!, -> !
look ? -> look?
peasant, I can -> peasant, he can
infos -> information
friends.. -> friends...
Please deliver her -> Please rescue her
shore of the lake.. shore of the lake.
ognions.. -> onions.
I restore -> I'll restore
you killed -> you killed.
Good !! -> Good!!
We found gold -> We found the gold

S4
Why are they trying to reach Lintanir?

S5
contryside -> countryside
dunefolks'citadel -> dunefolks' citadel
fire those damn orcs -> kill those damn orcs
agree with Grizzt.. -> agree with Grizzt.
succed -> succeeded

The Elvish Assassins can't collect xp.

I'm pretty sure there is a better way to implement a female version of this unit.

S6
us..This -> us. This
to help.. -> to help.
What !!! there -> What?! There
Death of undead leaders -> Defeat the undead leaders
It doesn't make much sense that you know in advance that you will face undead. Same suggestions as for S2.
Again !!! -> Again?!
their allies.. -> their allies...
asap.. -> as soon as possible.

The line 'they talk again about their allies' doesn't make sense, no allies were mentioned.

S7
not very high -> not very high.
ennemies'leader ->the enemy leaders

Taking a break for now.


General stuff
The scenarios preferably need names.
Your important characters need a silver crown.
There seems to be a lot of checking if hero characters are alive. But since they are hero characters, their death ends the campaign either way, so those checks seem redundant to me.
The add-on description warns the player to keep the dark elves alive in S5. I suggest you implement the race of the Elvish Assassins as Dark Elves to match that.
It feels a bit like the add-on is unfinished, text wise. The explanations and interactions with the enemies are not quite fleshed out enough to make sense.
The add-on uses the 'outdated' 80% carry over which can allow the player to amass a lot of gold.